= ! =
He
< thinks >
himself
undetected
nibbling popcorn
on my pantry floor
but I know he
was
h
e
r
e
!
.
.
.
.
Telltale
Life around home / Tuesday, March 4th, 2014
= ! =
He
< thinks >
himself
undetected
nibbling popcorn
on my pantry floor
but I know he
was
h
e
r
e
!
.
.
.
.
ha ha! that is some great sentence structure.
Just. so. clever. and. cute! [Your post, but maybe the mouse as well]
Wonderful!!
Is this original with you? I wish I was so creative. He’s so cute.
It is!
The ears and whiskers are a gift from my husband. 🙂
You are awesome!
The whiskers are the best part. =) I LOVE word art!
Like I once warned you…..DO NOT succumb to the temptation to poison him. Think about that parfum de deade moussie in your wall, and the feeling will quickly pass.
Oh, I suppose you would prefer catching him live in a Cool Whip container, like we did with that tarantula long ago…?
[wink]
Got it. No poison.
I love this! I was just thinking a few days ago about a poem about coke in the shape of a glass bottle. I enjoyed that in my “other life” before so many naps, snacks, dishes, burps, chores, coordination:) occupied my brain power.
This is rich! Thanks for giving me a grin for today.
and I found the tell tale signs on my pantry shelf atop last fall’s peaches. Sorry, Shari, I did not know how to make this look like a mouse or the stuff he left behind! ‘Twas a great day when we caught three of those little rascals and plugged the hole we figured was the only way in!! Papa has a great story to tell about two traps that disappeared and were found a bit later!
I love it! Now I know what kind of poetry my class should try next! May I use this in class if I cite the author?
Of course! if I may beg the return favor of getting a peek at their creations? 🙂 Fun, fun.
Love it! 🙂
a mouse in writing is much cuter than a mouse {in}deed!
My thoughts exactly 🙂
I love this!
Just revisited this with my class when we were discussing free verse. Always fun to watch them discover it.