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10 years ago

ha ha! that is some great sentence structure.

10 years ago

Just. so. clever. and. cute! [Your post, but maybe the mouse as well]

Carla
10 years ago

Wonderful!!

Lynnelle
10 years ago

Is this original with you? I wish I was so creative. He’s so cute.

Shari
10 years ago
Reply to  Lynnelle

It is!
The ears and whiskers are a gift from my husband. 🙂

Lynnelle
10 years ago
Reply to  Shari

You are awesome!

10 years ago

The whiskers are the best part. =) I LOVE word art!

Becca
10 years ago

Like I once warned you…..DO NOT succumb to the temptation to poison him. Think about that parfum de deade moussie in your wall, and the feeling will quickly pass.

Shari
10 years ago
Reply to  Becca

Oh, I suppose you would prefer catching him live in a Cool Whip container, like we did with that tarantula long ago…?

[wink]

Got it. No poison.

Beth
10 years ago

I love this! I was just thinking a few days ago about a poem about coke in the shape of a glass bottle. I enjoyed that in my “other life” before so many naps, snacks, dishes, burps, chores, coordination:) occupied my brain power.

quintuplicatemom
10 years ago

This is rich! Thanks for giving me a grin for today.

Mama Zook
10 years ago

and I found the tell tale signs on my pantry shelf atop last fall’s peaches. Sorry, Shari, I did not know how to make this look like a mouse or the stuff he left behind! ‘Twas a great day when we caught three of those little rascals and plugged the hole we figured was the only way in!! Papa has a great story to tell about two traps that disappeared and were found a bit later!

Anna
10 years ago

I love it! Now I know what kind of poetry my class should try next! May I use this in class if I cite the author?

Shari
10 years ago
Reply to  Anna

Of course! if I may beg the return favor of getting a peek at their creations? 🙂 Fun, fun.

10 years ago

Love it! 🙂

Shaunda
10 years ago

a mouse in writing is much cuter than a mouse {in}deed!

10 years ago
Reply to  Shaunda

My thoughts exactly 🙂

Tabitha Schmidt
10 years ago

I love this!

Travis
5 years ago

Just revisited this with my class when we were discussing free verse. Always fun to watch them discover it.

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